Human resources HR is a professional field dedicated to ensuring safety, fair treatment, and compensation for employees at work.
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Thanks for this essay. Here are a few comments. I hope you find them helpful. Introduction The second sentence in your intro can be left out.
You can see more examples of tired old phrases and generic sentences here and here. In this essay, I will outline how your level of interest in your job, your salary, and your working environment contribute to job satisfaction.
Paragraph 2 The topic sentence for paragraph two seems to refer to the entire essay, not just Paragraph Two. A clear short topic sentence at the start of each body paragraph which summarizes the paragraph helps the reader. Your other topic sentences in Paras 3 and 4 are fine.
Paragraph 3 Some problems with pronouns.
Perhaps you could look on the bright side. It seems you are trying to do something you mentioned in the thesis. The conclusion is not the place, however, for new information. OR Firstly, people who work in their field of interest find their jobs interesting. They became more satisfied when they get a chance to show their technical skills and abilities.
Pronoun Reference They became more satisfied when they get a chance to show their technical skills and abilities. The rest of the sentences in Paragraph Two have the same problem. Who will see the satisfaction? Be very careful with the subject of each sentence.
OR Regardless of their position in an organization, employees cannot be satisfied if their incomes are inadequate. This is mostly true, but not all people work to make money.
Some people love what they do, and the money is secondary. The reason is unimportant: People are more likely to be satisfied in jobs, where they work with passion in friendly way The comma here is not needed.
If in doubt, leave commas out. People are more likely to be satisfied in jobs where they can work with passion in a friendly atmosphere.
Overall, the essay is not too bad. Your organization is generally good.PAVEMENT PRESERVATION TREATMENTS AT-A-GLANCE. Micro surfacing — A mixture of aggregate, asphalt emulsion, water, and additives applied in a smooth layer over existing pavement.
When applied early in the pavement's life cycle, it can cost-effectively extend surface life by . I felt like a burden. Then I discovered John Stuart Mill and Milton Friedman and they said “People deserve to determine the course of their own lives” and “you own yourself” and stuff like that and I started entertaining the idea that I deserved to live, by virtue of being human.
Careerism is the idea of concentrating your “being the best you can be” efforts on your workplace or work activities, your work setting. Careerism is fairly wide spread along with its modern sibling consumerism which is the idea that satisfaction in life is best obtained from buying stuff and services.
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